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Great!

Although I think you could tone down the swearing by even just a few cuss words without ruining the movie, you pretty much have everything tied up into a neat little package. This is histerical flash at it's finest.... Well, maybe not as good as Legendary Frog's stuff, but 1000 times better than Retarded Animal Babies. Definitely gonna see part 3.

-Phantos

I'm not giving this a zero because it's bad

I'm sure that, despite your hatred for Newgrounds, and the fact that you're ripping off a character owned by Tom Fulp, but the fact is, this isn't even a flash movie! This is the opening TO a flash movie, and thus, is wasting space at Newgrounds! Who submits movies that aren't even FINISHED yet?

-Phantos

Pretty good.... I guess.

As good as it was, it DID have some very clear problems.

1. The sound effect for when Zero uses his lazer sword is a little high pitched at the end.

2. I'm not blaming you for it, but there were DOZENS of spelling errors. If you ever do something like this again(which I strongly suggest you do), then when it's finished, before you submit it to Newgrounds, any words that you are unsure of how they are spelled, take to www.dictionary.com. And you should try and add more depth to the conversations, so that it could be funnier, because trust me, that was funny.

I hope you take these 2 points into consideration, to help better your mad flash makin' skillz.

-Phantos

RatWorks responds:

1. sword sound: ya i definately should have done better on that. thx for noticing, i'll try to do better on sound in the future
2. spelllling? lol jk i know i need to have a friend spell check my stuff, or something.
i'm so glad u thought it was funny, i like knowing i made people either laugh or be happy. u know what i mean? haha mad flash makin skillz ^^ ur so awsome! i'm so glad u reviewed. thx for everything man it helped a lot. more then u'd think. thx again. ttyl

Garbage

You said it would get better after the newgrounds characters come in.... YOU LIED! This was clearly made with Microshit Paint or something, and you ripped off characters owned by much better flash designers than you.

This is not the worst movie ever submitted to Newgrounds, but it certainly is not worthy to have the name NG in it's title.

-Phantos

Petty

It looks like you have a vendetta against the Clock Crew. Now, I've only heard OF them, so I don't know what, if anything, they are about. But this seems like a childish attempt at making fun of them. You should consider going outside more often...

-Phantos

Here's what I suggest you do:

Take this movie, and really take the time to put in better graphics(maybe buy better software), plan out the humour and whatever lines there are in it better, and really put a better conserving effort into making this. Trust me, if you put a lot of effort, you could make this a humourous little short. But as it is now, it's in desperate need of work. Sorry man. :(

-Phantos

Despiar26, get a brain.

Why the hell would this man make a terrific story, build up over a years worth of excitement, work his ass off round the clock, day in, day out, write a brilliant story word for word, program flash after flash, coreograph intense and complex fight scenes, scour the web for backgrounds, just to stop because you don't have the brainpower to keep up with the story.

And if it's so "boring" then why did you give it a 9?

And there's only 2 more episodes left anyway. You would have to be mentally challenged to be unable to keep up with the plot when the plot is nearly finished anyway, considering that it's not like there's gonna be 1000 new plot twists over the course of 2 6 minute long flash movies.

SplashKat, brilliant, brilliant work once again. You would have gotten a 5 from me but.... Damn, why did Mog have to die? WWHHHHYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!

Anyway, keep up the good work.

-Phantos

Well that was messed up

Although it made no sense whatsoever, it had a good chuckle here or there. But still, how come the other episode's dialogues are written well, and this one looks like it was written by a 5-year old kid who only knows possibly 20 to 25 English words.

Oh well. I've seen much worse.

-Phantos

rebornMCW responds:

critic

I'm Canadian

And what Canada is going through right now is no laughing matter. The fact is, many people are dying because of this disease, and this flash mockery of a very serious disease is an insult to everything Canada has suffered for over the last few months. This is spitting on the face of an entire nation and you should be ashamed.

-Phantos

Plastico-Monkey responds:

Wow, I appologize if you were offended but this isn't a mockery. It's just a simple cartoon trying to give some smiles over what is a dark thing. Possibly even give some laughter to those afraid of it I mean SARS does die in the end.

"All good art is about something deeper than it admits." -Roger Ebert

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